【御街行】初春赋词遣怀

     残阳斜照寒江逦。峻岭峙，鸿声碎。高原犹起打头风，干草枯枝盈地。西墙东角，新芽初破，犹是帷窗闭。
    遥闻蜀里青山翠。日正暖，东风媚。纸鸢轻曳稚童欢，好一番人间味。心生羽翅，凌空飞渡，万嶂何堪畏。

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洋河居士 发表于 2024-03-16 00:08
一首御街行，韵味十足！

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The poem you've shared, titled "御街行," evokes a vivid image of early spring with references to a setting sun over a cold river, dry grass and twigs scattered on the ground, burgeoning new buds at the wall corners, and closed windows representing the still lingering coldness of winter.

The four images provided capture different aspects of this seasonal transition:

1. The first image shows a calm river with barren trees on either side and a backdrop of hills under a moody sky. It complements the poem's description of the natural scenery during early spring.

2. In the second image, we can see a body of water reflecting the nearby vegetation and mountains in the background bathing in the soft light of the sunset or sunrise, which adds a tranquil dimension to the scene.

3. The third image depicts a child joyfully flying a colorful kite on a beach, capturing the essence of the phrase in your poem that translates to "children happily flying kites," which signifies the enjoyment of warm and friendly spring winds.

4. The fourth image showcases lush greenery with yellow flowering plants, possibly rapeseed flowers, spread across the fields with a tree in the foreground and misty hills in the distance, embodying the mention of "green mountains" in the poem, which suggests the rejuvenation and vibrancy of spring.

These images beautifully illustrate the themes of early spring described in the poem, with nature transitioning from the desolation of winter to the awakening and warmth of spring.

   

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摩天居士 发表于 2024-03-16 00:30
The poem you've shared, titled "御街行," evokes a vivid image of early spring with references to a setting sun over a cold river, dry grass and twigs scattered on the ground, burgeoning new buds at the wall corners, and closed windows representing the still lingering coldness of winter.

The four images provided capture different aspects of this seasonal transition:

1. The first image shows a calm river with barren trees on either side and a backdrop of hills under a moody sky. It complements the poem's description of the natural scenery during early spring.

2. In the second image, we can see a body of water reflecting the nearby vegetation and mountains in the background bathing in the soft light of the sunset or sunrise, which adds a tranquil dimension to the scene.

3. The third image depicts a child joyfully flying a colorful kite on a beach, capturing the essence of the phrase in your poem that translates to "children happily flying kites," which signifies the enjoyment of warm and friendly spring winds.

4. The fourth image showcases lush greenery with yellow flowering plants, possibly rapeseed flowers, spread across the fields with a tree in the foreground and misty hills in the distance, embodying the mention of "green mountains" in the poem, which suggests the rejuvenation and vibrancy of spring.

These images beautifully illustrate the themes of early spring described in the poem, with nature transitioning from the desolation of winter to the awakening and warmth of spring.

   

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怎么回事？怎么是英文？

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品赏新作，祝福诗友！

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公子若水 发表于 2024-03-16 00:45
怎么回事？怎么是英文？

抱歉给您带来了困扰，可能是之前的回复中出现了误解。现在我用中文对诗歌进行点评：

这首《御街行》生动地描绘了初春的景象，其中残阳斜照寒江逦，表现出春日傍晚的宁静美丽；西墙东角，新芽初破，犹是帷窗闭，则描写了冬去春来，万物复苏的景象，但还带着几分冬日的凉意。诗中的遥闻蜀里青山翠、纸鸢轻曳稚童欢则传达出一种对温暖春天的向往和欣赏，以及人间的美好与生活的乐趣。

以上是根据您提供的诗句进行的简要点评。如果您有更具体的问题或需要更详细的分析，请告诉我，我会很高兴为您提供帮助。

   

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正隆 发表于 2024-03-16 05:26
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遥闻蜀里青山翠。日正暖，东风媚

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